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5 Cover Letter Techniques = Spellbound Hiring Managers

By CAREEREALISM-Approved Expert, Rosa Vargas

Bottom-line is, a cover letter’s purpose is to lure the reader to, well, read your resume and call you for an interview. Now you may be dying to ask me, why then can’t I only submit my resume? My answer is, you can—but how do you know your competition didn’t submit a persuasive cover letter that just about nudged you off the top spot? Hmm? Worst-case scenario, they can set your cover letter aside but it’s available if they need more convincing.

So, how do you create cover letter that is not tossed? I’m glad you asked…

1. Break a leg with your opening act: Don’t begin cover letters with an ordinary and boring statement. You really want to ‘have them at hello’ (Sorry. Couldn’t help it.) Really, captivate with the very first sentence. Exude sincerity, offer specific value, spin it, and make sure it’s employer-oriented. Here is one of my favorite openings

Dear Mr. Bradley:

“‘Offering to drive pharmaceutical sales growth by generating qualified leads, penetrating territories, and closing the toughest sales, consistently!’

Please allow me to introduce myself…”

2. Make a personal connection: You can tell a personal story that further positions you as the best candidate. You can provide statistical insight, reinforcing your industry knowledge. You may opt to walk your employer through your process. In other words, you can communicate more personally than you would on your resume and leverage that ‘ace in your pocket.’

See an example I used in a cover letter:

“I am an avid golfer (with a pretty good handicap) and golf at least twice per week—I have closed many sales on the golf course over a weekend. Clients consider me a trusted friend and have even helped me form golf teams for charity events, which is an excellent way to network and gain new business…”

Do you think I would have been able to add this golf example in the resume for my client –- no. Now, let’s say candidate #1 is a stellar sales person and candidate #2 (my client) is also an outstanding revenue producer–this example is helping my client promote an added value. This ’sign-on benefit’ clues the hiring manager that my client initiates and develops fruitful relationships through personal networking strategies that will be advantageous to the company. Besides, it’s memorable. In a pile of hundreds of resumes and cover letters –- memorable is a winner!

3. Become a tease: Foreshadow what will be listed on the resume; what they will discover when they read your resume–but don’t repeat. Piqué interest! Save some fresh content for your cover letter.  This is a strategic career marketing plan, part of which what goes on your resume or cover letter is determined–a real choreography! Example:

“Please refer to my resume which summarizes more than 15 years of experience increasing revenue for top corporations such as IBM. I have aggressively launched unique sales strategies that have produced up to $8M annually. You will find a full account of my projected sales plans and exceeded goals by percentage per year.”

Now we have asked the hiring manager to review the resume and we have provided a bit of information to spark interest. It is important to add quantifiable information and be specific, as you don’t want to seem vague. However, there is no need to provide all the details in the cover letter, especially if it will be on the resume. While I urge you to tease — the teasing must be done with actual facts and specific references not generalities that mean nothing.

4. Mesmerize them and get’em to say, YES: There is a physiological connection that goes on when you get a person to think or say yes. So, when you craft your cover letter try to envision the reader nodding their head in agreement with your statements. In order to do this you must validate their needs. You can cast this spell through reinforcing statements or questions. Take it easy on the questions though—you don’t want to come across too sales-driven. (The art of career marketing is a delicate balance.)

5. Ask for the interview: In sales, they always direct you to ask for the sale. Well, ask for the interview. Just ask for it!

The point here is that your cover letter is a supporting influencing tool. It must be unique, inviting, compelling– a prelude to a well crafted resume in order to provoke action. Your cover letter is part of a marketing package and so merely writing it as you would any other communication letter is not going to generate the interviews you seek.

True story: I had a client tell me that when they were interviewed they were told the cover letter clinched the interview and the resume was used as a guide for an interesting interview. Here is a beginning part of that cover letter:

“Music and entertainment is my passion. I am lucky to have realized so early what I was born to do! I have known I wanted to work in the entertainment industry since I was 11 years old. At age 4, I already had an affinity for music and entertainment…I loved to perform, watch all the award shows on TV, memorize the choreography to music videos, and I always wanted to know how it all worked behind the scenes.”

Client landed a job with Universal Music Distribution. There you have it. Market yourself as the ideal candidate via a purposefully created cover letter, which augments the resume, convincing the employer you’ve got what they need…in a very special way.

Rosa Elizabeth Vargas is a job search strategist who is triple-certified as an (MRW) Master Resume Writer, (NCRW) Nationally Certified, and (ACRW) Academy Certified Resume Writer. Additional qualifications include job search coaching and social media consulting. She has been helping job hunters for over seven years as owner of Creating Prints Resume Service, leveraging an accomplished 10-year career as a Leader/Senior Manager, which included interviewing, hiring, training, and building strong and competent teams. You can find her on Twitter at @resumeservice.

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  • joshuaprice
    Point 5 was a key point for me.
    I can't believe how many cover letters i have sent out in the past without asking for the interview, its such a simple thing, yet so easily missed. Although now i get my cover letter written for me. I wonder how many jobs interviews i lost over not doing that simple thing

    Great article
  • Name
    The first example of an opening line is not a complete sentence. That would never fly in some professions.

    Otherwise, good advice!
  • Name
    Re #5 -- That person would not have gotten an interview with me. I couldn't hire anyone who lacked the ability to make nouns and verbs agree ("Music and entertainment ARE my passionS.").
  • resumeservice
    I differ. In this situation, we are using Music and Entertainment as one subject. We are not referring to the art of Music and the field of Entertainment as two separate subjects.

    In this field, when you discuss Music alone you mean a career totally different than Music & Entertainment. (I have capitalized those nouns on purpose by the way to bring attention to them.) Therefore, the verb “IS” is correct and "Passion" as a singular noun is also correct. The subject and the verb ARE in agreement.

    However, I understand your confusion. It would be clearer if you had the entire cover letter or exposure to that industry.
  • Re: the opening act- be very careful how you do this. I agree with the tip, but the line you give above sounds straight out of a product sales page. Too over-the-top is also a turn off. Rather, if you're going to quote anything, briefly quote a recommendation someone made about you, such as on LinkedIn.

    "The art of career marketing is a delicate balance."
  • resumeservice
    Jacob,

    HI! Totally understand what you are saying. Allow me to point out that this client *is* selling products. He is in pharmaceutical sales. It worked for him in his field. Now, your advice deserves consideration…especially for less “aggressive” industries. It is all about the audience. You have to know how you can 'sell' in a resume based on whom you are targeting. I would temper it for non-sales job titles.

    A recommendation is a nice touch also. Thanks, for your comment.
  • bohemedude
    Excellent advice...

    I always advise my clients to write strong cover letters that truly market the unique contribution they can make to an organizations success. These suggestions are beyond stellar. I will definitely share these with my career coaching clients.

    Jerome Imhoff
    The Resume Shop, "INK"
    San Francisco
  • resumeservice
    Thanks for your kind comment, Jerome.

    Thanks to all for the tweets of this post!
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