Write Your Resume from an Employer’s-eye View

Write Your ResumeYour resume is in pretty good shape. Isn’t it? You have been perusing professional samples online and you have been reading all the how to’s, when to’s, and don’ts. Well, then why no quality interview calls?

Despite unemployment rate still at 9.3% as of the end of July, there ARE opportunities out there. It is tougher, let’s face it, but why? Because your competition is talented and highly qualified. Therefore, you, my friend, have to step up your job-search game and dare to take control of your brand on paper (resume) by not playing it safe but standing out on your own.

What am I referring to? Applying the old objective plus career chronology resume format you learned in high school isn’t going to cut it anymore. It is now imperative your resume pop and quickly capture attention. That it convey value over others who are also extremely qualified. That you tell a story about how you rescued the company, department, location, region, initiative, client base, or project. How? Survey your career from the employer’s-eye view and promote your exclusivity. Then, you will know how to best write a resume that implicitly tells an unmatched story that hogs the job search spot light.

The Basics You Must Know

1. Presentation does matter. Seizing the attention of an employer means you have to break from the traditional and overly used resume presentation. While ultimately, content (achievements and qualifications) is what will win you an edge–by capturing attention first, you net the additional seconds necessary to entice, enthrall, guide, and compel through content (yes, content is still king). Now, know the design of your resume is conceptualized based on the industry you are targeting. Depending on your target industry, it may be necessary to keep the resume design conservative. Yet, conservative does not mean mundane. See below:

Write Your Resume from an Employer's-eye View | CAREEREALISM.com

Write Your Resume from an Employer's-eye View | CAREEREALISM.com

2. Write storytelling descriptions. As a career professional, I receive resume submissions daily. Most are in horrible shape but every now and then, I will find a few in my inbox that look nicely polished. (Thumbs up!) Yet, as I begin to read, the truth is discovered. The truth? The resume is an absolutely boring boilerplate; the job seeker has simply regurgitated the job description as if we don’t already know what the job entails.

Get this, your resume is not a job ad. You are not to list all the requirements to perform the job. (Employers already know what a job entails). Your resume is a candidate promotional tool and you are to tell and show…what YOU did with the opportunities under the given job title—not just you fulfilled the job title (that is the least expected of you).

Example:

Before: Job Description

Cross-Selling Specialist, Company Name Here, 2007 to Present

Responsible for managing sales of distributor partners and direct customers. Facilitated customer relationships, leveraged marketing programs, provided sales training, and developed unique selling tools to drive sales volume, revenue and margin by translating customer needs to product solutions.

What is unique about the above? Wouldn’t others who hold this very same position describe their job this very same way?

After: Job Story (Cliffhanger, normally followed by quantifiable achievements in bullet form.)

Cross-Selling Specialist—Company Name Here, 2007 to Present

Identified, tackled, and solved the lack of a systemic processes and efficient tools necessary to uncover account cross-selling opportunities and maximize sales growth despite a down market. Engineered a unique and user-friendly tool by leveraging industry ratios as benchmark to identify product slate. Developed accompanying process. Tested, rolled out, promoted, and launched commensurate sales staff training, successfully equipping this B2B organization to better quantify, target, and aggressively close cross-selling opportunities across 14 sectors. Earned a promotion based on results; tool is recognized as a global best practice standard.

The above tells a story. Does it not? Let’s see: 1) this person faced and solved an existing problem, 2) created opportunities for growth, 3) engineered a tool that positioned the company for long-term growth. This person’s work was recognized company wide. Wow! They actually produced results and not just executed the job.

Employer’s-eye View = “This person is worth meeting. Perhaps they can come and dissolve our similar obstacles in reaching increased margins.”

3. Add impact with marketing power. Sometimes quantifiable achievements can be best illustrated with a bit of pizazz (A graph, a table). See below:

Write Your Resume from an Employer's-eye View | CAREEREALISM.com

Bottom line is don’t be afraid to break from the historic way of presenting yourself on your resume. True, perhaps you will surprise prospective employers and yes, perhaps you will be the only one submitting a resume likes yours. Is that a bad thing? Are you a leader or a follower?

Playing it safe and blending in does not win interviews for top-paying jobs.

Time to shoot higher and dare to break the norm.

As always, e-mail me if you have any questions: rvargas@creatingprints.com.

[This article was originally posted on an earlier date]

Rosa Elizabeth Vargas is the owner of Career Steering, an executive resume writing service. She’s an Elite Master Resume Writer (MRW), Certified Expert Resume Writer (CERW), Nationally Certified Resume Writer (NCRW), and Academy Certified Resume Writer (ACRW).

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About Rosa Elizabeth Vargas

Rosa Elizabeth Vargas is the owner of Career Steering, an executive resume writing service. She's an Elite Master Resume Writer, Certified Expert Resume Writer, Nationally Certified Resume Writer, and Academy Certified Resume Writer.

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  1. Khadeidra says:

    I love this post! It is so helpful. I have always thought that my resume was spectacular but always wondered why I never received any calls back. Now I know why…. MY RESUME WASNT TELLING A STORY. I have so many stories on how I implemented new strategies to help boost company revenue but never knew and is still confused on how to word my accomplishments. I will try and work on that now. Thank you.

  2. cheryl says:

    I like it and I agree 100%; it aligns with my philosophy. I’m not in graphic arts or anything similar but all the more reason to make a sales, management, training, human resources (etc etc) resume unique. Can you imagine having to look at 200-500 of the same old resume for a sales position that basically says the same thing in each one?! Having said that, I have attended no less than 15 networking events since the first of the year. The speakers at these events (many are HR folks and hiring managers) have all said the same thing: use a summary statement at the top followed by a chronological format. These HR and management folks said they do not like functional resumes but they all agreed they wanted to see results on the resume not just job descriptions. They all gave the impression that we should keep it ‘conservative’. Boring. With all the emphasis on unique selling point and branding, how can you submit a traditional, conservative, chronological resume and expect to stand out in the crowd! (Even more, do I want to work for such a company that is so traditional and uncreative?). And what about those of us whose old jobs don’t exist and are trying to carve out new careers for ourselves–sometimes a functional resume that highlights your exact skills that match the job posting is the only way to go. If I am applying for a training manager position (one of several positions I held at my last job) a company would have to wait till page two to find out where in my resume it says I have the skills they are looking for for their posted training manager job. I had no less than 10-12 positions in my last consulting firm…a small company where we wore many hats, had to learn how to do everything and didn’t have time to ‘specialize’ in any one area while we were busy juggling numerous clients and responsibilities. As a ‘generalist’ with the ability to do just about anything thrown at me, it is impossible to get a foot in the door unless I use a UNIQUE resume and/or a functional resume since companies are NOT looking for generalists, they are looking for specific skills sets. A uniquely crafted resume is the way to go and if company doesn’t like th resume because its not ‘traditional’ enough or in a chronological format then I guess I wouldn’t be a good fit for that company nor they for me.

  3. Thanks Rose! These tips are so smart and helpful, it’s surprising to see how few job seekers use them. These tips can be easily extended to online profiles (like your LinkedIn) and personal websites. Make yourself as accessible as possible so that your interview can really delve into what makes you special. For an extra professional touch, try out Vizibility’s services for job seekers, where you are in control of your Google search results.

  4. Tony Morrison says:

    Hi Rosa! Thanks for sharing this information. Your resume is one of the first impressions you get to make on a recruiter or employer and it should stand out from the others. I think your idea to mix up the design is really great! Like you said, you should think about the industry you’re entering before you go too crazy. Some fields, like graphic design, give you the opportunity to really be creative, while if you’re going into finance, you may want to keep it conservative. Hopefully more people take your advice to step up their resumes.

  5. Colette Knight says:

    right it really looks different than others
    it is a great advice to write a resume,

    Colette Knight,

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